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lirvilas 1st May 2019, 6:00 PM edit delete
lirvilas
MJ seems the type who wouldn't mind seeing a few more strip clubs explode.

Welcome to May!

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BUMBLEBEE 1st May 2019, 9:30 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
Holy Crap you've already got eleven pages! Later, I'm off to the beginning...
BUMBLEBEE 1st May 2019, 9:51 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
Great start! This really moves. Your character bench is so deep, I feel a bit at a disadvantage not being more familiar with the canon...
lirvilas 2nd May 2019, 12:34 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
I hope that this narrative stands on its own. If there’s anything that doesn’t make sense after a few pages, let me know.
Microraptor 2nd May 2019, 12:39 PM edit delete reply
Microraptor
Does the phrasing "your American skin clubs" imply that MJ herself isn't an American?
AmeliaP 1st Aug 2019, 7:01 PM edit delete reply
AmeliaP
A larger detonation would more a Napalm airstrike for the bomb guys (I know, I know, technically it's different, but... you know what I meant).
Cooke 20th Sep 2019, 8:15 PM edit delete reply
Cooke
MJ is like the churches CSI. Except with more lethal allowances.
lirvilas 20th Sep 2019, 8:19 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
CSI?

"Cutting, Shooting, Incinerating"

Sure, that works.