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lirvilas 1st May 2019, 5:00 PM edit delete
MJ seems the type who wouldn't mind seeing a few more strip clubs explode.

Welcome to May!


BUMBLEBEE 1st May 2019, 8:30 PM edit delete reply
Holy Crap you've already got eleven pages! Later, I'm off to the beginning...
BUMBLEBEE 1st May 2019, 8:51 PM edit delete reply
Great start! This really moves. Your character bench is so deep, I feel a bit at a disadvantage not being more familiar with the canon...
lirvilas 1st May 2019, 11:34 PM edit delete reply
I hope that this narrative stands on its own. If there’s anything that doesn’t make sense after a few pages, let me know.
Microraptor 2nd May 2019, 11:39 AM edit delete reply
Does the phrasing "your American skin clubs" imply that MJ herself isn't an American?
AmeliaP 1st Aug 2019, 6:01 PM edit delete reply
A larger detonation would more a Napalm airstrike for the bomb guys (I know, I know, technically it's different, but... you know what I meant).
Cooke 20th Sep 2019, 7:15 PM edit delete reply
MJ is like the churches CSI. Except with more lethal allowances.
lirvilas 20th Sep 2019, 7:19 PM edit delete reply

"Cutting, Shooting, Incinerating"

Sure, that works.