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lirvilas 28th May 2019, 8:25 PM edit delete
OK, here's a more suitable end to the chapter.

I wonder if I'll ever get around to depicting the first time MJ realized she was made of more than dust.


Microraptor 29th May 2019, 6:44 AM edit delete reply
That's a nice "vertical panorama"!

Is the tiny airplane just to add some detail and flavor... or are MJ and Chuck being spied upon...?
lirvilas 29th May 2019, 6:55 AM edit delete reply
Yes... that's the proper mindset for Flyover Country!
Microraptor 29th May 2019, 7:22 AM edit delete reply
Also, it just dawned on me that this also works as an allusion to the comic's title...
Blotto 29th May 2019, 7:12 AM edit delete reply
Looks like the attractions are a bit more to his taste. She's gonna have to get out the ruler and rap more than his knuckles. XD
lirvilas 29th May 2019, 8:40 PM edit delete reply
Ha ha ha yeah

That said these next few pages won't be as depraved as one would expect.
Seabiscuit 29th May 2019, 4:45 PM edit delete reply
This comics been going since LAST month and I NEVER NOTICED IT EXISTED WTF

WELL I finally did find it and binged the whole archive, haha, damn
I love everything in this. Always a joy to see more Chuck, too.
lirvilas 29th May 2019, 6:45 PM edit delete reply
Dammit guys Seabiscuit found us

Shut it down


I mean, I’m making this thing for my own self-interested reasons... if anyone else happens to be entertained, that’s pure collateral fuckin’ damage.
AmeliaP 28th Aug 2019, 9:16 PM edit delete reply
Live Nude Girls next to the welcome board? Great city XD
lirvilas 28th Aug 2019, 11:04 PM edit delete reply
It's got a "twin" city next to it...

The name is "Champaign".

No kidding.
Cooke 20th Sep 2019, 7:39 PM edit delete reply
Nice first chapter. Fast paced, action, mystery and Chuck & MJ play well off each other. Well done.
lirvilas 20th Sep 2019, 7:49 PM edit delete reply
thanks man

totally not stalking you with my responses.

Also: let me know when you light off your next thing.
Cooke 20th Sep 2019, 8:20 PM edit delete reply
Man, I fell way behind on my subs. Feels like a mountain to climb to catch up. But after reading a few pages of this, I'll be catching up on here first.
lirvilas 20th Sep 2019, 9:16 PM edit delete reply
dude go read something with redeeming value, this is just page after tedious page of me living out my blatant shoe fetish