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lirvilas 15th Jul 2019, 9:26 PM edit delete
Hoorah three months!


Yeah, MJ, I wouldn't exactly call Father Exodus an authoritative source.


anonymous coward 16th Jul 2019, 4:13 AM edit delete reply
This Exodus guy is doing a lot more talking and a lot less shooting than you'd think a guy carrying multiple SMGs into a planned confrontation would do. Considering that someone tossing a grenade at him and Sunshine is not an entirely unexpected response to showing up armed and ready with a screaming hostage I have to wonder three things: 1) Why is he even talking? 2) Why show up looking ready to shoot someone if that wasn't what they planned from the start? 3) Why hasn't he started shooting yet?

The simplest answer I can think of is that this is a plan to paint our protagonist threesome as dangerous terrorists by encouraging them to shoot first by scaring them into action. I'm not sure that fits considering that a grenade has gone off, his partner has started shooting suppressive fire with a shotgun, and Exodus is still talking. I wonder if their actual plan is smarter than that, or if instead it is not as smart as that.
Microraptor 16th Jul 2019, 6:59 AM edit delete reply
It's probably closer to the truth to call MJ a rouge agent! :-D
lirvilas 17th Jul 2019, 9:36 PM edit delete reply
That's my other series!

Although I am kinda suppressing putting MJ into the pinup rotation, since she gets enough screen time here.
Cooke 24th Sep 2019, 3:06 PM edit delete reply
MJ has been sold down the swany. Or is it all just whisper networks playing games.
lirvilas 24th Sep 2019, 4:34 PM edit delete reply